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that peer reviewers may miss or not be aware of.

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.

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page.

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Mortal Kombat: Deception

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Clements Markham

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List of Star Trek: The Original Series episodes

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Norton LiveUpdate

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Joe Louis

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1995 American League West tie-breaker game

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New Age

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    • allege
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    • Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
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Ali's Smile: Naked Scientology

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Max Payne (film)

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Fixed these things --PeppageBRAINS! 13:33, 29 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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Jifna

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Internet forum

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Cinema of Sri Lanka

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Tay-Sachs disease

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Violet goby

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Take a Girl Child to Work Day

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Acantopsis octoactinotos

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Fungus

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Fixed. Sasata (talk) 17:57, 27 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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Changed were needed. Malljaja (talk) 17:24, 28 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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The article's pretty long, so I think this is ok as is. Sasata (talk) 08:45, 5 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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    • it has been
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All weasels are cited. Sasata (talk) 08:45, 5 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: flavor (A) (British: flavour), behaviour (B) (American: behavior), meter (A) (British: metre), metre (B) (American: meter), recognize (A) (British: recognise), colonize (A) (British: colonise), ization (A) (British: isation), isation (B) (American: ization), analyse (B) (American: analyze), any more (B) (American: anymore), cosy (B) (American: cozy), mold (A) (British: mould), mould (B) (American: mold).
Done. The only Brit spellings that remain are those left intentionally, or in the references. Sasata (talk) 08:30, 5 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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Done. Malljaja (talk) 19:17, 30 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • As done in
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Looks ok now. Sasata (talk) 08:45, 5 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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Togari (manga)

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Iowa (album)

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Old Time Missionary Baptist

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Jack King (NASA)

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Cherry Poppin' Daddies

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Brave Story

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Guitar Hero: On Tour series

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2008 Turkish Grand Prix

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2008 Philadelphia Phillies season

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Oxygen toxicity

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FYI: The bot found "This limit has been reduced..." --RexxS (talk) 12:52, 25 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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New York State Route 280

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Australian Crawl discography

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Survival horror

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Chuck E. Cheese's

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I've checked the entire article over and all footnotes/citations are after the punctuation mark, so the first suggestion is redundant. The second suggestion is placed on every automated peer review, as I already copyedited the article a month ago. I'm still hoping for a personal peer review so I can get some real suggestions.  Dylanlip  (talk) 14:36, 24 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Pro-ana

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List of New York Mets seasons

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