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Dog

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List of Reborn! chapters

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List of Apple mergers and acquisitions

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Luc Bourdon

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River Irwell

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The Muppets' Wizard of Oz

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Carbon-14

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Virginia

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List of The Wild Wild West episodes

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Sebastian Shaw (actor)

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Gerard K. O'Neill

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The Office (US TV series) season 4

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Tropical Storm Karina (2008)

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Pride & Joy (comics)

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Maxwell's equations

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First Lord of the Treasury

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Samuel of Bulgaria

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S. A. Dange

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Red Horn (legend)

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Croatia national football team

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Karma in Hinduism

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Movieland

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Metroid Prime 3: Corruption

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Prohibition of death

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Mediocre (album)

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Tree: A Life Story

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Denise Phua

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List of mayors of Hamburg

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List of House episodes

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Bollocks - misreading of the never-adopted "guideline". Commented firther on operators talk page. Johnbod (talk) 11:57, 2 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

The galleries are absolutely essential to the quality and coherence of the article..I agree with Johnbod (talk · contribs) that the above is a misreading of guidelines and policy. Modernist (talk) 03:37, 3 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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DONE Johnbod (talk) 19:44, 9 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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Er, right - isn't there a script for this. Johnbod (talk) 12:02, 3 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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I can only see - in note 2 - "his 37th birthday". Isn't this ok? If not sbe spelled I suppose. Johnbod (talk) 12:02, 3 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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Done Johnbod (talk) 12:02, 3 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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Already has many sub-pages, with hatnotes. Johnbod (talk) 11:59, 2 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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I think all referenced. Johnbod (talk) 11:59, 2 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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but often not. Johnbod (talk) 11:59, 2 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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All done I think - captions, quotes etc. One is after a ) which I think is ok. Johnbod (talk) 19:36, 9 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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