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by a group of experts in a particular subject, and articles that undergo this process should not be assumed to have greater authority than any other.

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The following peer review suggestions were semi-automatically generated by a

stylistic issues
that peer reviewers may miss or not be aware of.

Creation procedure
Generally, the suggestions will be generated

semi-automatically by User:AZPR, though all users can run the script themselves by following the instructions for installation
.

How to respond to a request
Feel free to strike out issues that have already been taken care of or to respond to problems; questions about issues can be left on this page (which hopefully an editor will notice and respond to) or on the articles

peer review
page.

How to remove a request
Automated reviews for articles that have been closed or archived should be left on this page to keep the links organized.

How to get updated suggestions
A message can be left at here or here requesting an updated automated review, or you can install the script yourself by following instructions at User:AndyZ/peerreviewer#Installation

Notes
Please see User:AndyZ/peerreviewer/guide for additional information about specific suggestions.

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William de Corbeil

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Herschel Greer Stadium

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Live to Tell

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Alfred Denning, Baron Denning

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Boho, County Fermanagh

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Michael Jackson

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Jersey Act

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List of Jericho episodes

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All issues dealt with. NuclearWarfare (Talk) 19:32, 2 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

B-17 Flying Fortress survivors

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My French Coach and My Spanish Coach

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Aurora's drift

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Adam Levine

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National Park Community College

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William Murray, 1st Earl of Mansfield

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Pollenia rudis

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Norton Internet Security

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Vertigo (film)

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Emily Williams discography

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Smallville

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Flag of Singapore

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Jesus College Boat Club (Oxford)

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Rings of Saturn

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243 Ida

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Histeridae

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Lucilia cuprina

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List of notable Nashville Sounds alumni

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Chrysomya bezziana

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Anglesey Central Railway

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Muscina sp.

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U.S. Route 41 in Michigan

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Aglossa cuprina

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Cleridae

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Bruce Castle

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Oiceoptoma noveboracense

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Synthesiomyia nudiseta

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Gene Kelly filmography

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List of number-one albums of 2007 (U.S.)

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Sustainability

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Our only gallery, Biogeochemical cycles, seems fully justified to me.Granitethighs (talk) 22:26, 4 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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Not sure what this is driving at but we can certainly do with assistance on displaying all the info we have. I think our boxes are fine but an expert on these things could maybe give us some suggestions.Granitethighs (talk) 22:29, 4 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
GT, infoboxes are template boxes in the upper right corner of article, like the one here Dandenong Ranges. There are none applicable to the sustainability article though. Nick carson (talk) 14:26, 5 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Ah - thanks Nick Granitethighs (talk) 09:15, 6 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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I can only see one of these ... "The sustainability transformation" ... which seems to me to be an exception to this general rule.Granitethighs (talk) 22:34, 4 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I've changed this to "Transformation." How does that work for others? Sunray (talk) 23:51, 8 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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We've got one or two sort of like this - I'll have a closer look.Granitethighs (talk) 09:20, 6 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, we repeat "sustainability a couple of times. I've provisionally converted "Measuring sustainability" to "Measurement" and "Economic sustainability" to "Ecomomics." There may be better headings we could use for these. Sunray (talk) 23:59, 6 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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I think we've adressed this issue as best we can and downsized the ToC and summarised sections to the limit. Nick carson (talk) 14:29, 5 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not sure we have. There were a total of 16 headings, sub-headings and sub-sub-headings in the "Implementation" section. I've had a bash at cutting it down, but am not yet happy with it. I think we could merge a few of these sections, some of which are tiny. Sunray (talk) 23:59, 6 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Sounds like a plan, but I'm just concerned with loosing any information that we have, perhaps we need to start a list of articles to be created? Nick carson (talk) 03:05, 21 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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I'd go for the English but what do others think?Granitethighs (talk) 09:20, 6 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Seems like a no brainer with two Ausies, a Canuck and a Kiwi on the team ;-) We will have trouble maintaining Brit spelling, though, so we will have to make it clear through a commented note at the top of the article and a note at the top of the talk page. Sunray (talk) 23:59, 6 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Agreed. Nick carson (talk) 14:11, 23 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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I've been correcting this as I go through the list of citations, but I am only about a third of the way through. Sunray (talk) 23:59, 6 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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Yes, we will need to go through again (and again) with the 1a criteria in front of our eyes. Both Tony and AndyZ make some good suggestions. Sunray (talk) 23:59, 6 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Some of these suggestions are great, general things like omitting the 'sustianability' from section headings like "Measuring Sustainability to "Measuring", etc, are fantastic, but alot of the PR suggestions suffer from a bit of a pigeonhole syndrome; this article has quite a wide scope, even though it's sections are predominantly split into dedicated main articles, it reduces it's content, but it doesn't reduce it's scope, which ultimately can't be reduced, it's the nature of the subject matter, like the articles on Life and the Universe, except that these still come under the biology and physical cosmology umbrellas, so they can reduce their contents sections, add info boxes, etc. I think all peer reviewers must be aware of these facts and understand that there are little precedences for this article, so it can't be treated like "a normal" article, and must be treated as a "case by case" situation. Nick carson (talk) 02:57, 21 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Jarome Iginla

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