Wikipedia:Peer review/Automated/July 2009

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The Green Green Grass

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Madonna (entertainer)

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British Rail Class 390

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Global Positioning System

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Times Square

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List of works of John Douglas (new churches)

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Intel Core i7

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Docklands Light Railway rolling stock

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MIKE2.0 Methodology

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Blackburn Olympic F.C.

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93rd Infantry Division (United States)

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England

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Degrassi: The Next Generation (season 8)

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List of wind farm projects in Romania

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Degrassi: The Next Generation (season 9)

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Harvard Bridge

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Wright brothers

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Politics of global warming

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Messerschmitt Bf 109

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Dante (Devil May Cry)

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Daredevil (Marvel Comics)

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Adam Wilson (The Young and the Restless)

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Bob Kane

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Oliver Fish

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Bubbles (chimpanzee)

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From Hell

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Fearless (Taylor Swift album)

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Thelnetham Windmill

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Brisingr

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List of tallest residential buildings in the world

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November Nine

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Pool of Radiance

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Sustainability

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Star Wars: Episode I: Battle for Naboo

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Only one image on the page, which is inside an infobox. The only occurance of "it has been" is not an expression of opinion from anyone, but used to illustrate the nature of a fact.  Afaber012  (talk)  14:10, 12 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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