Wikipedia:Peer review/Automated/April 2008

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Peer review process exposes articles to closer scrutiny from a broader group of editors, and is intended for high-quality articles that have already undergone extensive work, often as a way of preparing a featured article candidate. It is not academic peer review
by a group of experts in a particular subject, and articles that undergo this process should not be assumed to have greater authority than any other.

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"How to write a great article", and "The perfect article". Articles that need extensive basic editing should be directed to Pages needing attention, Requests for expansion or Cleanup, and content or neutrality disputes should be listed at Requests for comment
.

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The following peer review suggestions were semi-automatically generated by a

stylistic issues
that peer reviewers may miss or not be aware of.

Creation procedure
Generally, the suggestions will be generated

semi-automatically by User:AZPR, though all users can run the script themselves by following the instructions for installation
.

How to respond to a request
Feel free to strike out issues that have already been taken care of or to respond to problems; questions about issues can be left on this page (which hopefully an editor will notice and respond to) or on the articles

peer review
page.

How to remove a request
Automated reviews for articles that have been closed or archived should be left on this page to keep the links organized.

How to get updated suggestions
A message can be left at here or here requesting an updated automated review, or you can install the script yourself by following instructions at User:AndyZ/peerreviewer#Installation

Notes
Please see User:AndyZ/peerreviewer/guide for additional information about specific suggestions.

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Indigenous people of the Everglades region

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London

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Unconventional warfare (United States Department of Defense doctrine)

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Facebook

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Thoroughbred

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Homicidal ideation

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Jeffrey Steele

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Ubuntu (operating system)

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I'm striking things out as I fix them.
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HMS Cardiff (D108)

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Carlito's Way

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Treaty of Axim (1642)

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Thomas Cranmer

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The End (Red Dwarf episode)

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List of Red Dwarf episodes

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Mario Kart Wii

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Treaty of Butre (1656)

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Touch Me I'm Sick

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History of Blackpool F.C. (1887–1962)

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Survivor Series (2004)

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Year Zero (album)

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The Simpsons (season 3)

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Dr. Dre

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Rachel Corrie

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Himura Kenshin

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2008-09 Duke Blue Devils men's basketball team

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Gardens of Versailles

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Treehouse of Horror VI

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Formation and evolution of the Solar System

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Bert Trautmann

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Pat the Bunny

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Effects of Hurricane Dennis in Florida

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Ross Kemp in Afghanistan

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List of Lizzie McGuire episodes

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British Rail Class 47

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Forensic entomologist

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History of forensic entomology

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Megaselia scalaris

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Use of DNA in forensic entomology

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Black Moshannon State Park

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