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British BCs

Hey Jason, quick question: in all of the British BC articles, you mention that the torpedo bulkheads were abreast the magazines and shell rooms; am I correct in reading that to mean that's the only portions of the ships protected by a bulkhead? I'd just look at Roberts myself, but like an idiot I returned it to the library last week. Thanks. Parsecboy (talk) 00:32, 23 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I've done the same sort of thing, so you have plenty of company. The torpedo bulkheads only cover the magazines and shell rooms, not the machinery from Invincible through Tiger. From Renown onward, the bulkhead backs the bulge and is continuous.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:45, 23 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks, that's what I thought you meant. I had considered scanning Roberts before I returned it, but decided against it. `Parsecboy (talk) 01:00, 23 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I think it depends on how quickly you can get hold of the books, I'm a bit too impatient, so I prefer to have my own copy on hand. I'm in the process of being a scanning fool as I've got a bunch of volumes of Warship to do, along with Sokol, Burt's British predreadnought book and a few others. Cheaper than photocopying, although I do prefer reading them on paper.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:44, 23 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Reviews

I hope those are not finished reviews. They don't offer me much help in improving them.--

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The articles are pretty good already and only need the specified material added to be passed. If I give a line a + sign then it's good to go and needs no further work.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 05:28, 24 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
These are part of a group of 16 that I have been working on together. I have added a lot of features to them mirroring what I have done with the other articles. I might have to expand Sims a bit more before it is really finished. I will try to finish these up tomorrow. I just want to make sure I have gotten all of them with the same types of features.--
WP:FOUR) 05:36, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply
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OK, I was wondering what was going on with them. Let me know when you're done with them. And, BTW, I'd strongly recommend that you do a few GA reviews yourself to help offset all of your GANs.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 06:50, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Battle of Saint Cast

Have taken your advice and added citations. Please take another look to see if it is up to 'B' now. Thanks.Tttom1 (talk) 06:18, 24 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Citations are now complete, but there's one bit of truly awkward prose that needs to be fixed that I've marked with a tag.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:01, 24 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Have rewritten passage.Tttom1 (talk) 19:18, 24 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Good enough.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:31, 24 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA reviews

I just wanted to say thanks for taking the time to review my GAN articles. If there is any question, unclear statement or any suggestion for improvement, please make it. Best regards, Constantine 23:07, 28 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, you make it easy; well-written articles that comply with the MOS deserve it.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:16, 28 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Sturmvogel, a quick suggestion about your GA reviews - when you pass an article, could you fill in the "|topic=" parameter on the GA template with the appropriate category? For military articles, the category is usually History. This helps to categorize the article properly. Thanks, Nikkimaria (talk) 03:36, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Sure, but you might want to add that to the instructions. I'll try to remember that from now on.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:41, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
It is in the instructions on the GAN page, under "Pass" - that part's just in a footnote, so it's fairly easy to miss. Nikkimaria (talk) 15:54, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, it is. Y'all should make it more prominent.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:10, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hello again. I noticed your GA nomination of Russian battleship Imperatritsa Ekaterina Velikaya, and I have a question/remark: shouldn't the name be rendered Yekaterina, since this is the proper pronunciation of the name in Russian? Constantine 06:45, 30 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

This article is currently a GA nominee. Could you possibly give it a quick review before August 30? The reason I am asking is because you reviewed Lavaca Bay for me recently.--William S. Saturn (talk) 00:36, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Please be sure to get a map from somewhere.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:59, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the review. I have addressed all concerns.--William S. Saturn (talk) 07:34, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Kevin Lowe (lacrosse)

Come have a look.--

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infobox for Egyptian Labour Corps article

Thanks for your suggestion. Yes, I agree this article as well as the Egyptian Camel Transport Corps article need info boxes, but I am not sure which template to use as the military unit template is so clearly designed for fighting units. Is there one for service units? --RoslynSKP (talk) 08:07, 30 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Milhist A-class and Peer reviews Jul-Dec 2009

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Can you help

With plain English here - [1] - ThanksJo0doe (talk) 17:48, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

HMS New Zealand

Hello Sturmvogel 66. Some time ago I wrote an article about New Zealand in pl wiki. I found in all my sources, like Conway's or Colledge (2006), she was launching on 1st July. Can you tell me, why did you write 11th? Is this any mistake or that web source is correct and I don't know something about? Greetings KrzysM99 (talk) 19:39, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

It's a typo; I'll fix it momentarily.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:23, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
It isn't ;). There is 11th on RNZN page. Change source. -- KrzysM99 (talk) 08:43, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

User:TonyTheTiger/sandbox/cup

It appears that you are one of the finalists. I have put together a summary chart for us to sort of get to know each other. Feel free to come by and fill in

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Can you link your historical submissions?--
WP:FOUR) 23:05, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply
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<puzzled>I suppose, but why bother? The numbers are good.</puzzled>--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:10, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

WikiCup 2010 August newsletter

We have our final eight! The best of luck to those who remain. A bumper newsletter this week as we start our home straight.

  • Pool A's winner was Colorado Sturmvogel_66 (submissions). Awarded the top score overall this round, Sturmvogel_66 writes primarily on military history, favouring Naval warfare.
  • Pool B's winner was New South Wales Casliber (submissions). Awarded the top score for featured articles this round, Casliber writes primarily on natural sciences, especially botany and ornithology.
  • Pool A's close second was Hungary Sasata (submissions). Awarded the top score for featured pictures this round, Sasata writes primarily on natural sciences, favouring mycology.
  • Pool B's close second was Colombia ThinkBlue (submissions). Awarded the top score for good articles and topics this round, ThinkBlue primarily writes content related to television and film, including 30 Rock.
  • The first wildcard was New Orleans TonyTheTiger (submissions). Awarded the top score for did you knows and valued pictures this round, TonyTheTiger writes on a number of topics, including baseball, American football and Chicago.
  • The second wildcard was White Shadows (submissions). Someone who has helped the Cup behind the scenes all year, White Shadows said "I'm still in shock that I made it this far" and writes primarily on Naval warfare, especially U-boats.
  • The third wildcard was Connecticut Staxringold (submissions). Awarded the top score for featured lists and topics this round, Staxringold primarily writes on sport and television, including baseball and 30 Rock.
  • The fourth wildcard was William S. Saturn (submissions). Entering the final eight only on the final day of the round, William S. Saturn writes on a number of topics, mostly related to Texas.

We say goodbye to the six who fell at the final hurdle.

Gary King (submissions) contributed a variety of did you know articles. Finland Suomi Finland 2009 (submissions) said "I'm surprised to have survived so far into the competition", but was extactic to see Finland in the semi-finals. Norway Arsenikk (submissions) did not score this round, but has scored highly in previous rounds. We also say goodbye to Ian Rose (submissions), who withdrew earlier this month after spending six weeks overseas. Anyone interested in this round's results can see them here and here. Thank you to Bavaria Stone (submissions
) for these.

here
- the final eight are encouraged to add themselves to the list.

Our final eight will play it out for two months, after which we will know 2010's WikiCup winner, and a variety of prizes will be awarded. As ever, anything you worry may not receive the necessary attention before the end of the round (such as outstanding GA or FA nominations) is welcome at

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Congratulations

The WikiChevrons
The WikiChevrons are hereby bestowed upon Sturmvogel 66 for his great efforts in the August 2010
Military History monthly article writing Contest, placing equal first with a total of 133 points from 23 articles. Well done! Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 12:41, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply
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Thanks, Ian.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:30, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Talk:Josh Sims/GA1

I have addressed your concerns at

WP:FOUR) 18:59, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply
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Dyk hook

Hi. FYI, one of your hooks in the queue has been tweaked. There's a thread on it at

HausTalk 16:30, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply
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OK by me--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:32, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

HMS Glorious

Hi Can you check teh article as this does not seem right the squadron was re-formed with Courageous as flagship along with her sister ship Courageous presume one of the names should be Glorius --Jim Sweeney (talk) 02:37, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Good catch, over-zealous use of copy-paste, I'm afraid.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:59, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

French pre-dreads

I have to confess that was in waaay too much of a rush to find even the slightest unobvious resources for some of the ships. But for some, I think I busted my bones using Google Books. Good luck finding nice references for them. Buggie111 (talk) 03:35, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I have a couple of French-language titles that I'll have to request if we're ever going to get them to even GA. The Italian pre-dreadnoughts are going to be another problem and I don't even know of any Italian-language sources for their operational histories.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:38, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

DYK for French ironclad La Galissonnière

RlevseTalk 12:04, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply

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DYK noms

I have approved your hooks for

Pará class monitor. Nice work.4meter4 (talk) 17:28, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply
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DYK for John Ericsson class monitor

RlevseTalk • 18:04, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply

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DYK for French ironclad Triomphante

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Belated thanks

Hey, Sturm: A discussion going on

Stephen R. Mallory. PKKloeppel (talk) 02:10, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply
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Hmm, I didn't know that either. I think it might be one of those things that it's nice to do, but are rarely done because I've done lots of reviews and rarely been thanked, but then I never expected to be thanked, so I was not offended. At any rate, you're welcome; I hope you give me more opportunities to review your work.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:42, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

DYK for Brazilian monitor Pará

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Not goofing off

The new edition of

Chicago is out, updated for the first time in 7 years, I believe. I think I can help most with the GAN backlog by dealing with copyediting issues in a bunch of different GANs, but I'd rather read the new Chicago first, and it's a lot to digest. Back soon, busier than before. - Dank (push to talk) 15:54, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply
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All I can say is better you than me.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:29, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
1000 pages, small type, organized according to their own special logic. Joy joy. - Dank (push to talk) 16:47, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I won a copy of the 14th? edition (the early 80s one) in a giveaway by the UC Press, but have hardly ever looked at since it didn't cover my eternal question about the possessive plural of words that end in 's'.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:46, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

DYK for Pará class monitor