User:Mieulon/sandbox
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To Do
Fix Links:
https://www.wikidata.org/wiki/Q5709969 Astringency (Mouthfeel)
https://www.wikidata.org/wiki/Q2031663 Shibui/Shibumi
https://www.wikidata.org/wiki/Q378705 Astringent (Chemical Compound)
Reference
Wikipedia:How to write a plot summary
Help:Wikipedia: The Missing Manual
Special:Prefixindex/User:Mieulon
Wikipedia:Reference desk/Mathematics
Article Evaluation
The article is lacking a cohesive organizational structure.
Information is plainly stated with little explanation.
Only Euclid's work on the topic is explained. Two other mathematicians are mention without any details.
Citations are lacking. There are five sources, but only two of them were used for the bulk of the information. I am unsure if they were cited properly in the footnotes.
The talk page shows that no one is currently working on the article. It is part of WikiProject Mathematics, where it is listed as a C-Class, level-4, vital article with high priority.