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Edit corrected

I removed "Google" as a reference, however the fact of the claim of a number of "hits" on Google remains a truth does it not? It is being used to demonstrate numbers of people who are rebelling against the use of the term "Democrat Party by such as Limbaugh etc.

Regards `` bob

Hello, while you are correct, the statement is perfectly accurate, it constitutes
original research. Anything that is not already wrote somewhere else cannot be put in an article. For example, you could says, Limbaugh frequently uses the term and reference his transcripts for examples, but to say because google has x counts of the term brings a bit of insinuation into it that crosses the line. If there is an article somewhere that says something along that line though it could be used to source. I think your rephrase is fine now. :) —Charles Edward (Talk | Contribs) 18:29, 30 April 2010 (UTC)[reply
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Thank you

The Reviewers Award The Reviewers Award
To Charles Edward, for high quality reviewing at
FAC Karanacs (talk) 13:51, 6 April 2010 (UTC)[reply
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Thank you for doing so many reviews lately - they are much appreciated! Karanacs (talk) 13:51, 6 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

You are welcome! Thank you! —Charles Edward (Talk | Contribs) 13:53, 6 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

DYK nomination for Truce of Leulinghem

Looks like there's further work required on this DYK nomination - it's now the oldest nomination on the list. Schwede66 23:20, 8 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

DYK for Truce of Leulinghem

Updated DYK query On
DYKSTATS if it got over 5,000. If you know of another interesting fact from a recently created article, then please suggest it on the Did you know? talk page
.

Materialscientist (talk) 09:11, 10 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ganoga Lake

<font=3> Thanks again for your kind words, review, and support.
featured article! Ruhrfisch ><>°° 21:16, 10 April 2010 (UTC)[reply
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Paramount Television Network

Hi Charles,

Thanks for your excellent recent FAC review of Paramount Television Network. Based on your observations, I have made these changes to the article. However, I left some requests for clarification on the review page concerning a few other improvements you mentioned. Could you drop by the article's review page when you have a free moment? Again, thank you for your thorough review. Firsfron of Ronchester 05:10, 11 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I've complete the review on the article and made a reply on the review page. Thanks! —Charles Edward (Talk | Contribs) 12:17, 12 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Your

Hello, I just wanted to introduce myself and let you know I am glad to be reviewing the article

criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Grondemar 05:19, 11 April 2010 (UTC)[reply
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I completed my review and placed the article on hold. Please see the review for more details. Grondemar 06:08, 11 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I've passed GA for Lieutenant Governor of Indiana. Congratulations! Grondemar 02:57, 13 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Talk:All Frames of the Game is going to be deleted

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Talkback

Hello, Charles Edward. You have new messages at Talk:Maria Branwell.
Message added 03:04, 21 April 2010 (UTC). You can remove this notice at any time by removing the {{Talkback}} or {{Tb}} template.

Kudpung (talk) 03:04, 21 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Re: Lisa Simpson

Hello, Charles Edward. You have new messages at Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Lisa Simpson/archive3.
You can remove this notice at any time by removing the {{Talkback}} or {{Tb}} template.

Paramount Television Network FAC

Hi Charles,

Thanks for your note here. I greatly appreciated your thorough review and your valuable feedback at the article's FAC. Yours was the only serious review, and the article improved through your efforts. I'm not sure I'll resubmit the article to FAC, because it's a lot of effort to nominate an article for FAC for that level of community participation. However, I want to thank you for your feedback and work to make the article better. It is deeply appreciated. Best wishes, Firsfron of Ronchester 15:24, 24 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Charles,
Thanks to several encouraging comments to resubmit the article, I have done so. If your offer to re-review the article is still open, I'd appreciate your feedback once more. Thank you. Firsfron of Ronchester 17:04, 1 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Done! Thanks for letting me know. I bet it will get through this time. Two seems to be the lucky number at FAC. —Charles Edward (Talk | Contribs) 17:07, 1 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Wabash star

I was really pleased to see that your Wabash article has been promoted; is there an appropriate date when it could be proposed for TFA? I remember th article from its first FA nomination when it needed quite a bit of work, and I'm glad you persevered. Well done indeed. Brianboulton (talk) 22:45, 25 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! I quite enjoyed working on it. I am working on something similar lately, Little Orphant Annie and James Whitcomb Riley. I don't know that "Wabash" has a particular date.. Maybe December 11, Indiana Day, or March 13 was the day it became a state song, or April 22, Paul Dresser's birthday. —Charles Edward (Talk | Contribs) 01:33, 26 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Your
GA nomination of Little Orphant Annie

The article

good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needed to be addressed. If these are fixed within seven days, the article will pass, otherwise it will fail. See Talk:Little Orphant Annie for things which need to be addressed. –– Jezhotwells (talk) 21:25, 26 April 2010 (UTC)[reply
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WikiCup 2010 April newsletter

Round two is over, and we are down to our final 32. For anyone interested in the final standings (though not arranged by group) this page has been compiled. Congratulations to

WikiCup talk page
.

Judge iMatthew has retired from Wikipedia, and we wish him the best. The competition has been ticking over well with minimal need for judge intervention, so thank you to everyone making that possible. A special thank you goes to participants

Fox and The ed17 17:32, 30 April 2010 (UTC)[reply
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Parthian Empire

Hi Charles! Thanks for your review of Parthian Empire. As you requested, I added a bit more information on China, mostly in regards to the Han diplomat Gan Ying, his attempt to reach Rome, and Parthia's rather deliberate thwarting of his mission. Cheers!--Pericles of AthensTalk 19:10, 2 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I also added a bit more information on
Indo-Parthia, since you also mentioned India.--Pericles of AthensTalk 01:32, 5 May 2010 (UTC)[reply
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Singin' and Swingin'

Charles, I finally got around to addressing the comments you made at FAC before it closed. [1] Would you mind taking a look at them, and let me know what you think? I had some questions and requests for clarification for you. I also wanted to know if you thought the article was ready to be resubmitted. Personally, I think it is, and since we came so close before, it's probably an easy pass after all your great feedback. Thanks again. --Christine (talk) 04:43, 4 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! I've replied on the article talk page. :) —Charles Edward (Talk | Contribs) 12:27, 4 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

A quick thank you for your review of Ernest Hemingway. When one spends too much time on a single article of such large scope, it's easy to lose perspective, particularly of the prose. "Tighten" and "redundant" (though perhaps obvious to you) were helpful remarks. Thanks. The article is better because of your review.

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DYK for James Whitcomb Riley

Thanks for this one Victuallers (talk) 00:04, 10 May 2010 (UTC)[reply

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The article James Whitcomb Riley you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:James Whitcomb Riley for eventual comments about the article. Well done!. (Sorry about the delay, I had connection problems over the weekend.) AdamBMorgan (talk) 20:13, 10 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Murder of Marwa El-Sherbini

Dear Charles Edward,

Thanks you for reviewing the featured article candidate. Following your suggestion I have made some changes. I would be please if you could give an indication of much copy editing still remains to be done to get the prose right. If you think a considerable amount still need still be done, I will happily leave it and request some help and resubmit later. If you think, it just needs it just needs some little more tweaking, I would be equally happy do it now. Mootros (talk) 16:58, 13 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Karanacs made me do it!

Seriously though, I think the article is generally excellent, but it's let down by the weaker opening few sections, until Minton's political career really gets underway. I'd guess that you inherited much of that, and I know from experience how difficult it can be to properly integrate the stuff you find in place when you decide to start work on an article to get it to FAC. Let me know when you're happy with the prose in the first half of the article and I'll take a look at it again, and hopefully be able to support.

Fatuorum 21:50, 14 May 2010 (UTC)[reply
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Haha! Well I certainly appreciate your review. :) I love nit picky comments, to be honest. I perform poorest at copyedittign and best at researching.. I am going over the article now. I will message you when I'm done. I might be able pare back the first section a bit too. You are right, I did "inherit" a bit of that. Thanks —Charles Edward (Talk | Contribs) 22:01, 14 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
You seemed to me to be right on the button with the FAC immediately above this section; that's where I remembered your name from.
Fatuorum 22:48, 14 May 2010 (UTC)[reply
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Lol! Well I've known of you for quite a long while. :) You fight the good fight. My compliments. —Charles Edward (Talk | Contribs) 22:52, 14 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Well, that's a shame. Presuming to read Karanacs' mind for a moment, I don't think she archived the article because there were too many unresolved issues, but simply because even with all/most of them dealt with, it hadn't attracted enough reviewers/support and would be unlikely to do so in the usual time frame of these things. Still, if you renominate in a couple of weeks I think it should sail through. I'll keep an eye out for its reappearance. (I've got another question too, which I'll dump on the article's talk page later.) All the best, Steve T • C 07:38, 19 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I think you are right, it didn't get a thorough review until the last week. Same problem I had with it last time! It's not the most interesting of topics I think is the problem. Thanks for your efforts! —Charles Edward (Talk | Contribs) 12:05, 19 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

DYK for Indianapolis Journal